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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(41):乘公交车与骑自行车

发布时间:2013-07-31 17:52浏览次数:3227
要求:
学生上学通常有两种方式:乘公交车与骑自行车。两种方式各有特点。请你以“Going to School by Bus or by Bicycle”为题,按照以下要点写一篇英语短文:
乘公交车:节省时间、节省体力
骑自行车:锻炼身体、灵活方便
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Going to School by Bus or by Bicycle
There are basically two ways to go to school.
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。

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Going to School by bus or by Bicycle There are basically two ways to go to school,namely bus and bicycle.For some students,they can save quite a lot of time and energy by bus so that they can have more time and energy to study .While for other students,they would like to go to school by bicycle.In their opinions,it is more convenient to go to school by bicycle compared with by bus.What's more, riding bike to school is an effective way to do exercise which can help them to build a strong body.For me,i prefer riding bike to school because i don't want to waste time to waiting for bus and I can't stand the air in bus because buses are always crowed with people during the rush hour.

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