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要求：
1. 条理清楚，有表明自己观点的句子。
2. 书写工整，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。4. 参考词汇：China dream，come true ,achieve one's dreams., give up， hold on to, make up of
作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
MYDREAM Everyone has his dreams. As young students, we have many kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. The dreams can be very big, they can also be small. In fact,a big dream is made up of many dreams. My name's Li Hong. I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream. I must learn as much as I can. When I meet any difficulty, I won't give it up , I must get it over . I'm sure it's very important to dream,. Some dreams are more realistic, others are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true one day.
