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要求：
1. 条理清楚，有表明自己观点的句子。
2. 书写工整，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。4. 参考词汇：China dream，come true ,achieve one's dreams., give up， hold on to, make up of
简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，高级词汇使用稍显不足；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。
MYDREAM Everyone has his dreams. As young students, we have many kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. The dreams can be very big,and they also can be small. In fact,a big dream is made up of many different dreams. My name's Li Hong. I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist.I think scientists are very cool. From now on, I must study hard to achieve my dream. I must learn as much as I can. When I meet any difficulty, I won't give it up, I must get it over.I always think belive in myself,and I will win. I'm sure it's very important to dream,. Some dreams are more realistic,and others are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true one day.
