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2003年专业四级英语作文真题:保持好心情

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:19浏览次数:3977
要求:
题目 The importance of keeping a good mood.
说明 People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, or family. So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances. Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a composition of about 150 words on the following topic: The importance of keeping a good mood.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
评语:

采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

With the rapid development of modern society,people bear more pressure than the past from their work,family or relationship and so on.Except for being capable of dealing with problems,it is of importance to keep a good mood every day which ensures you a healthy phsycology to live and work. On the one hand, it is a good mood that make people both mentally and physically healthy. Fortunes always fall down on people who are in good condition. On the other hand,even under great pressure,a good mood provides you a clear mind to think and act as nervousity or fear adds the burden to your heart which only make the situation worse. In conclusion,people cannot work things well without a good mood.If we are able to control our mood to suit our lives,there is nothing to defeat us.

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