采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。
With the rapid development of modern society,people bear more pressure than the past from their work,family or relationship and so on.Except for being capable of dealing with problems,it is of importance to keep a good mood every day which ensures you a healthy phsycology to live and work. On the one hand, it is a good mood that make people both mentally and physically healthy. Fortunes always fall down on people who are in good condition. On the other hand,even under great pressure,a good mood provides you a clear mind to think and act as nervousity or fear adds the burden to your heart which only make the situation worse. In conclusion,people cannot work things well without a good mood.If we are able to control our mood to suit our lives,there is nothing to defeat us.