结构良好,但是语言不流畅;句式变化多样;文中拼写错误稍多,并请注意词汇拼写的检查。
it is known that it is incorrect that we get conclusion by what we have seen and what we have heard.it is wise that we experriance it. there aer some people that believe what others say easily,wnich is badly influnce themsleves.it is high time that we should do something for oursleves to stronger us.
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