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作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量。
As a multi-national county, China is famous of openness and inclusiveness for that in every part of the motherland, not only can we easily share the same hospitality, but also experience the local characteristic. My hometown, Guangzhou, is one of the most worthwhile places to visit in the country with plenty of places of interest and various food. Taking a bird's eye-view of Guangzhou, Canton Tower could be the first building to catch our sight. Admittedly, from 2010, Canton Tower is the landmark of the city for its extremely height, ranking the first above all the constructions. Especially, it shapes like a lady's waists that so called 'the thin waist'. Most importantly, the creations of 'Highest Observation Deck' and the 'Highest Trill Ride' break the Guninness World Records. Last but not least, Canton Tower is an adorable place for sightseeing with convenient transportation. There is no doubt that Guangzhou is a modernised city visited by a number of foreigners every year. While the landmark, Canton Tower, must be the place worth of travel.
