2013年山东英语中考模拟试卷英语作文:关于微笑

文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

It was fine.I went for an outing with my classmates today. We met at our school gate.Everybody was arrived when the time was half past eight in the morning.Then we set off for the People's Park.We took about twenty minutes to ride to the park. In the Park,the sun was shinning and there were many people.We had great fun playing games until 12 o'clock.We were all tired and hungry,so we took out food from our bags,then we had a picnic. In the afternoon,we went around the park.We couldn't help taking photos when we found some beautiful places.Besides,we visited the zoo in the park.There were various kinds of animals.Such as monkey,elephant,tiger,deer and so on... We left the part at 5 o'clock.It was an unforgettable experience.