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文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；文章结构严谨，有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
Chengdu is a well known city for its special food and unique culture.If a foreign friend of me comes to see my hometown,I would like to take him to visit Chengdu.First,I will take him to the Zoo to see giant pandas because they are regarded as our national treasure and they are also very cute.I think my friend would love them.Then,I will take him to the ChunXi road which is a good place for shopping because it's the most prosperous place in Chengdu.Next,I will take him to the RenMin Park where he can learn more about Chendu citizen's daily life such as playing MaJiang,Playing TaiJi and drinking Chinese tea.Finally,I will take him to JingLi.There quite a lot local food and some ancient architectures.
