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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
To:KPOHsales@hotmail.com From:hubin@163.com Dear sir I am glad to know you. I know your company new production no.5670 in the exhibition which is hold in NewYeark from 15th to 22th December. We are very interesting about it. Please sent us a price list and instruction. Thanks for your co-operate and we hope we can establish business relationship. Your,hubin
