2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦153:志愿者

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I often help other people.How about you,do you often help other people.So,I want to be a volunteer in the future. If I to be a volunteer.I want to help people in my free time.The poeple in the poor areas are so difficult.Althrough their life is very poor,but they always very happy.I want to use my change money to help them. Then,I want to help the old people.Most of them are very lonly.I hope I can give them some warm.I can talk my story with them.I also can help them do some housework.These old people need our help. At last,I would like to make some toys.Children are very poor in the poor areas. They don't have TV.They don't have phone.Some children even don't have books.I also want to give them some books. There are many people in need in the world.If you want to give them some help. Please give me your helping hands,we certrainly to agree with your suggest!