2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦153:志愿者

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

I like helping people who need help. I enjoy singing very much. So, if I have a chance to volunteer, I’d like to be a teacher to teach children many songs that I like. I love children. Looking at their sweet smile is so happy. And I think it’s also my honor to make others happier. If I am a volunteer, I will be a great one.