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I often help other people.How about you,do you often help other people.So,I want to be a volunteer in the future. If I can be a volunteer in the future,I want to help people in my free time.The people in the poor areas are so difficult.Although their life is very poor, they always are very happy.I want to use my pocket money to help them. Then,I want to help the old people.Most of them are very lonely.I hope I can give them some warm.I can share my story with them.I can also help them do some housework.These old people need our help. At last,I would like to make some toys.Children in the poor areas are very cute.But they don't have TVs.They don't have mobile phones.Some children even don't have books.I also want to give them some books. There are many people who need help in the world.If you want to give them some help. Please join me in helping others.
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