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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
The Internet is one of important tools. If you set up an internet line, you can see anything any time. When you don't know some place, you can find it on line. When you don't anything, you can review the Internet any time. Sometimes you want to read a novel, but your parents don't give you some money. If you have a computer with connecting internet, you can see any novels. Meanwhile, you want to study English, you can download some information about English. But some studies usually play game in internet when they are out of school. They can't control themselves, because of interesting games. I know that I can control myself when I am playing games. So, how are you control yourself? At first, you must set a plan of playing game. As usual, you can play games one hour on Saturday and Sunday. In the end, you must control yourself and must do it. And then, you let your mother to help you to inspect. You must believe that you can do it.
