2013年山东英语中考模拟试卷英语作文:关于微笑

从句使用不熟练；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累学术词汇；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

It was fine.I went for an outing with my classmates today. We met at our school gate.Everybody arrived here when the time was half past eight in the morning.Then we set off for the People's Park.It took about twenty minutes that we rided a bike to the park. In the Park,the sun was shinning and there were many people.We had great fun playing games until 12 o'clock.We were all tired and hungry,so we took out food from our bags,then we had a picnic. In the afternoon,we went around the park.We couldn't help taking photos when we found some beautiful places.Besides,we visited the zoo in the park.There were various kinds of animals.Such as monkey,elephant,tiger,deer and so on... At last,we left the part at 5 o'clock.It was an unforgettable experience.