雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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It is no doute that more and more ports of the peolpe wants to travel to other coutries. But as we know that still some parts of the people afraid this. What ever the reason were comed from the crime or enviroment. the conservation people more likely to surrounding their home. Maybe they can watch TV to stand for the only. Because in some way, we have to recognize how the terrible belonging feeling control the people