【题目要求】
Advertising encourage people to buy in quantity rather than promoting its quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
【题目分析】
老题。广告出题种类两种,一种为大范围的(易写),如广告的好与坏;一种为考察细节的(难写),如来自竞争公司的广告对消费者的影响,而此次考试属于后者。所以大家要加强审题练习。语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;可增加从句和复杂句的使用;文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高,高级词汇的积累上也要再接再厉。
nowadays many companies are willing to invest in advertisement to promote sales instead of improving the quality of their products which will cause negative effects for the future. it seems like the behavior that for getting the eggs to kill the chicken.undebatably,it's dangerous that to exaggerate inappropriatly the effect of advertisement.from wher i stand we should take more effort in improving the products, otherwhile the companies will at risk of losing honest customers and bad images. we have to admit advertisement is comprising the fraction of sales while we can't ignore the quality of products. in my opinion, we also shouldn't forget service especially in service industry.