作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,高级词汇使用过少;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
When you buy some books in the book store, they will put these books into a disposal bag. In fact, you can take them with your hand, but you use to take a disposal bag. Especially, when you want to buy something in a supermarket, they are usually pack them in disposal bag. In fact, you can take a recycle bag. If we don't limit the use of disposal bags, there are a lot of disposal bags anywhere. You will see them in the river or in the sea or on the land and so on. The disposal bags are not disintegrate. So our earth will be polluted and then we can't live on the earth. I think that they are usually with disposal bag. And they don't know that this is an important question. The disposal bags will pollute environment, because they can't disintegrate, we must limit the use of disposal bags. I hope anyone when they want to go shopping, please take a recycle bag before out of their home. And limiting the use of disposal bags.