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字数：300 满分：100分
采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中词汇使用较丰富，高级词汇使用要加强；作者句法知识较为扎实，可增加复合句和从句使用。
When I finished the book called Notre Dame de Paris written by French Victor Hugo, all my feelings are it is indeed a well-public masterpiece with shocking plots that are obliviously with a special style. At the beginning of the book, I feel sorry so much for Pierre Grangoi who is a poor and homeless poet live like a beggar even less. Because he hardly die from a beggar's skill test .Thanks to the heroine named Gypsy Esmeralda, pretending to be agreed to marry him to save his life. Such a pathetic man desire nothing but to live. The heroine is my favorite character,she is brave,kind,generous,enthusiastic and has a
