作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
In our life,everyone needs have a couple of friends.The friends would help you when you get into trouble or feel sadly. Friends always stay at your side to make you more happy. Of course,if you want to make some friends,you should give the friendly ways to the others. you shall take care of other people more than yourself. Don't be basis on appearance to make friend. when all of you have a problem,you need discussion instead of quarrel.