2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦154:患难朋友

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中词汇表达多样性不足，在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累；行为稍欠流畅，过渡词用的还可以。

In our life,everyone needs have a couple of friends.The friends would help you when you get into trouble or feel sad. Friends always stay at your side to make you happier. Of course,if you want to make friends,you will use in a friendly way. You should also take care of other person more than yourself. Don't be on the basis of appearance to make a friend. When all of you have a problem,you need discussion instead of quarrel.