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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33618
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分70.5分
评语:

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;文中高级词汇使用较少,但单词拼写做的很棒;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。

用户练习作文:

What are Smart Consumers Like? Nowadays, the social life around us is growing faster and more interesting.We students are attracted by lots of funny things like food, travel etc. Thus, we should learn to be smart consumers. What are smart consumers like? First, smart consumers will make sure what they really want or need. It is very important for that, if not, people may spend much on some useless items. That will be a great waste. Second, they collect some coupons in daily life so that they can buy the things with less cost. Besides, they also share with each other if convenient. In this way, they take the most advantages of the coupons: the person who owns one but not needs it will not waste it, and the needing one can have the discount. Third, when they want to travel or to eat out, they look for group-buy deals, which will cost less while getting the same service. Fourth, they buy clothes while on sale. It takes the least to bring the beautiful suits home. However,they seldom or nerver buy clothes in season ,for that usually costs the most. Above all, smart consumers can always think out some ways to save money ,but they are not blind savers or buyers.

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