3. 生词提示:disadvantage n. 缺点 cheat vt. 欺骗 go online上网
拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
Today many students are interested in going online. But it has advantages and disadvantages. The advantages are: getting a lot of information quickly, a useful learning tool and making friends. The disadvantages are: playing games and chatting can waste time and money, and it isn’t good for our study. You can be cheat when you go online. I think going online is good for me. I plan to go online for an hour everyday. If you make a plan, you can find it is very useful. We use it to open to expand the field of vision, the study knowledge, but must certainly grasp the discretion.