2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(17)写作:上网优缺点

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

Today many students are interested in going online. But it has advantages and disadvantages. The advantages are getting a lot of information quickly, a useful learning tool and making friends. The disadvantages are playing games and chatting can waste time and money, it isn’t good for our eyes. You may cheat when you go online. I think going online is good for me. I plan to go online for an hour every day. If you make a plan, you can find it is very useful. We use it to open to expand the field of vision, the study knowledge, but must certainly grasp the discretion.