2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(17)写作:上网优缺点

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

Today many students are interested in going online. But it has advantages and disadvantages. The advantages are getting a lot of information quickly, a useful learning tool and making friends.The disadvantages are playing games and chatting can waste time and money, it isn’t good for our eyes. You may cheat when you go online. I think going online is good for me. I plan to go online for an hour every day. If you make a plan, you can find it is very useful. We use it to open to expand the field of vision and the study knowledge, but we must certainly grasp the discretion.