采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;注意句式在文中的变化,加强一些从句的使用,文章会更棒;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多。
I have a good friend.She is a girl.she is very pertty.Her name is Lingling.she is a yelow people. her eyes is black and so big.she is often smial.she have a big backpack.she like eat apple and banana.and she like sports.she is very like runing. I aslo like runing.so we be good friend.