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With the developent of the society and economy,the interpersonal communication has become more and more significant in modern life .Particularly,communication on the Intenet has great effect on businessperson.As a result, it becomes an indispensable to life. It is very essential for everyone to study how to communicate with others on the Internet.On the one hand,Internet on interpersonal communication can not only save lot of time each other,but also have a convenient communication methods,which is benefiacial to keep touch with others all the time .On the other hand,it can help us to reach out to new friends,and provides us with good communication.On the contrary,it have also bad aspects,Communication on the Internet can make us keep away from our best friends and relatives,and lacks our personal emotion to them.Furthermore,it have great influence with our normal communication skills. Therefore,Interpersonal communication depend heavily on the success of different careers.Only when you have a good command of this communication skills,can you acquire more fulfillment.
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