For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .
You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。
A good appearance is not always a sucessful people in life,which indicates judging a person by their abilities rather than by their appearance .Thus,we do not pay more attention whether or not he has good appearance. Due to lacking the independent thought and judgement,people all believe that a good appearance can make great success.For example,there has more and more youngsters who are crazy about the famous korea stars nowadays,and they have a fancy for the handsome face and charming figure,this is explaining why some famous stars suddenly have plenty of fans by their appearance.However people should not only adjust their own values, but also learn to develop their virtue continuously. Although good appearance is helpful to give others a good impression,kindness and inner thought are the most important to make friends for all life time. Admittedly ,it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.Therefore,people should enhance their own value and acquire the beauty of the inner thought they belong to.Only in this way can they will get more respects from others.