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字数：300 满分：100分
可适当增加从句的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累高级词汇，拼写错误也要注意。
We need to be careful with our money as a colleague Nowdays,some colleagues are ague with one topic that we should spend a lot of mony enjoying life,and make life better,or we should be careful with mony to do more woth thing? In my opinion,I support the second one more. As students,we use money from our parents,when you are older than 18,your parents have no duty to give your money,we should know thanks,and they are very hard to make money,so we should respect their work. our duty is study hard instead of dressing beautiful to compare with others,so we should be careful with money to buy more books and learn more. In my view,as a student,should be careful with money.
可可英语 - 划词释义
