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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17595
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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文中一些高级词汇的使用比较灵活,但请注意单词拼写的检查;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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How to judge things correctly? DR.Smith, a famous psycology prefessor of university of Florida, gives the answer that people should know the thing from different angle to make the judgment reasonable. That would be take amount of time. In the other hand, the judgments people less even not to think about the links between others to make, are usually considered snap. To ensure the results bringed by judgment are advantageous, people should not make snap judgments. First, the life needs people to judge precisely. People do anything after their judgment, like cooking, drawing and writing, because people want to know what the results will take after doing this thing. For example, before graduate from high school, students are usually consider a question, shall I go to the university or work? If someone make a snap decision to work but he has the potential of academic achievement, well, the people might be a normal worker instead of a well-known professor. In a conclusion, precise judments are helpful for people's career. Moreover, snap judment might bring major faults. Some people work in the fields which are essential to a country even the world. If they sanpply judge things, the country even the world will enter a nightmare. Taking commander as a example. In the war, commander usually is decisive. Every action is from the judment of commander. If the commander make a hasty decision, all people in the army would died even the country would disappear. In general, judgment after mindful thinking is critical. In a conclusion, people should not make snap judgments because the judment might affect their career and take the worst result to a country even the world. Also, we should develop ourselves , enriching the experience and widen the horizon, so we can judge more precisely.

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