句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
I have a good friend.She is a beautiful and clever girl.She has a black short hair,two black big eyes,a high nose and a red mouse.We are at the same class and she is also my neighbor ,so we always play and go back home together.She is good at singing,dancing,drawing and so on. She is friendly for us,our teachers and classmates all like her very much.