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字数：300 满分：100分
全文结构较为严谨；注意句式在文中的变化，加强一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。
I think is a good idea to save money in everyway . which also need us to be a smart consumer .we should analysics the reality of ourself and make use of our money. save money need our carefully observe in our daily life . we just can buy what we really need. if something in a sale ,people may birth to buy it .that is a inform suitation .but at most time ,people can control themselves. the rich also do that. in last month,I came back home.there were some activities about buying phone. students graduted from high school usually wanted to buy it .they could save some money from that. it is convenient for them,, which also benefite the producer. At last ,I hope everyone can have a smart choose and be a good consumer
