拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;简单句稍微有点多,可适当增加从句使用。
So we all should save money and energy. In our life when we do not use the light completely,we ought to switch off it in time. After you used the tap water,it is extremely necessary that you remember to turn off the tap,because the water is not renewable resources.Nowadays a great number of children always ask their parents for so a great variety of unnecessary stuff that waste a many sum of valuable money. We also try our ability to avoid wasting food.