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Online shopings has been popular recently,especially among youngsters.They perfer to go online shoping than to go to the real store.Just like a coin which has two sides,it brings us convenience,however,its drawbacks can't be neglected,either. For one thing,consumers can spend less time shoping as online stores can provide enough goods available for them to choose from.In addition,online shoping can change people's lifestyle,which makes it possible for us to enjoy a leisure life.Furthermore,online shoping promoted the shops'sale scale,which helped ameliorate the econimical situation.For another,some fulse goods mislead many customers.online crimes worried the society.Online cheating disturbs lots of potential customers. Considering the situation,I suggert that the government should make laws to protect consumers from being cheated.The owers of the online shop should abide to their code .As the saying goes,buyer beware.consumers can't be careful enough.With these done,I think online shoping will be of great benefit to us.
