拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。
So we all should save money and energy. In our life,when we did not use the light completely,we ought to switch off it in time. After you used the tap water,it is extremely necessary that you remember to turn off the tap,because the water is not renewable resources.Nowadays a great number of children always ask their parents for a great variety of unnecessary stuff ,to avoid waste a large sum of valuable money, we should not buy those. We also try our best to avoid wasting food.