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Dear schoolmates, It’s known to us all that money can do lots of things. Nowadays, our country is not very rich, and it’s not easy for our parents to make money. Let’s do something to help them. As students, we should try our best to save money. First, we had better ride a bike to school rather than take a taxi. Second, we can bring lunch to school instead of buying snacks. Third, we hope everyone wears clean school uniforms rather than wear expensive clothes. Fourth, we could drink water as much as possible instead of soft drinks. Fifth, we should turn off lights when we leave the rooms. In a word, we should do many more things, so that we could save more money for our parents. Students’ Union