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Tony 明天将和父母去度假，他给朋友李明留言。请李明帮忙照顾一下他的家。内容包括：打扫房间、照看狗、浇花等。请以Tony的名义写一封留言，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（以下为稿纸）
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇表达不够多样，希望能多使用高级词汇；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
Dear Li Ming, My parents and I are going on vacation tomorrow. I need your help. Could you please take care of my house during we are not at home?I will bring a gift which you like so long to thank you.I have already written a few household job which you need to do on this list,please don not forget to check it before you do some housework.
