2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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This is my hometown in the city of anhui,My hometown is very beautiful which it is a place of water and mountain.f you come here,I will go to mountain of huangshan with you,which warmwater、stone.we must climb 3 hours to top of mountain due to its high,so we buy a lot of water and bread in the road.