可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Every coin has two sides.Putting all your eggs in one basket,likely,has both advantages and disadvantages.Yet,in my opinion,the disadvantages of putting your eggs in one basket far outweigh its advantages.Thus,it is never too careful to always have plan B when we cope with important events. Nobody can know what is going to happen in the future.When unexpected accidents happened,you would find yourself in a desperate situation,losing everything you have.Putting all you have in one thing equals to putting all the risks and pressures together.That’s why we need to think about all the possible risks and prepare extra plans ahead before we make decisions on important events.In other words,we must have different plans and preparations for fear of undesirable results.