2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；文章词汇使用比较恰当，高级词汇积累不足。

It is unwise to make a conclusion immediately once seeing or hearing. There is a saying that it is unwise to make a conclusion immediately once seeing or hearing. And there is also a similar saying in China that thinking twice before doing. Both of the saying thell us to think more and then take actions. First,the fact underlies what you saw may have several answers. For example, when you see teenager use iphone and something luxury, if you make a conclusion immediately that he was born in a rich family and his parents are rich people. But the fact that he works hard and earns money to buy these goods will go against your conclusion. Therefore, we should not make a conclusion immediately without thinking. Second,thinking can make your answer more perfect. As we all know that every coin has two side, which means every thing has several dimensions. We should think in different view, so that we can make a conclusion more perfect. Last but not least, instead of looking at surface, we had better find out the deepth of the thing we saw or heard. What's more, beautiful outside doesn't means beautiful inside. And the most important of all, it is its inner which is the necessary to people. To short, it is unwise to make a conclusion immediately once seeing or hearing. Thinking more and get the agreeable answer.