采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;复杂句采用很棒;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,且检查文中的拼写错误。
I have a best friend ,Her name is kevin,she has a beautiful eyes and small mouth ,She has also a long black hair,she like swiming、excise、playing basketball、climb moutain、sing and dance .she study is very good.we are always do homework after school in my home, I like her very much,she is very good for me. when I have some difficult in my study,she always help me to resolve. Iam really appreciate to her. This is my best friend in my life.