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I have a best friend ,Her name is kevin,she has a beautiful eyes and small mouth ,She has also a long black hair,she like swiming、excise、playing basketball、climb moutain、sing and dance .she study is very good.we are always do homework after school in my home,I like her very much,she is very good for me.when I have some difficult in my study,she always help me to resolve.Iam really appreciate to her.This is my best friend in my life.