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Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment Nowadays tourism is a necessary part of our daily life. More and more people like to travel ,but we all ignore a problem, environment.In my opinion, I think tourism will bring harm to the environment. A few days ago ,I went to Xinjiang with my family. In such a beautiful city,I am shocked with the city. Everywhere is clean, I can't even see a piece of paper in the grand . The local people told me ,because of the recent crime events ,more and more people are frightened to come to here. Without the people ,the city absolutely easy to clean up. On the other side, in Beijing, I think everywhere is dirty ,which is caused by the tourists that don't have the sense of the responsibility .It was the tourism bring harm to the environment. Just like the coin has two sides. We can't treat the tourism in one thought.What we need do is to face the problem that tourists caused and also find the proper way to deal with it .One world ,one home ,it's time for us to do something for our home.
