高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；文章组织结构良好。

My hometown,where are narrow streets and rough houses, used to be a comfortable place for people to live in,with a lot of trees surrounding it and the rivers there were so clean,fishes living happily. People worked laboriously and led a poor life.However,due to the development of the society, more and more tall buildings and factories appear.Industrial development makes the environment worse with trees decreasing rapidly.It is urgent to deal with the environmental pollution.