小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My name is Yvonne.I am a twenty old girl.Lily is my best friend . She is nighteen old girl .Yeah. We are neigbour and classmate too.We spend all the free time with together. Just like family rather than friend . She is a lovely and kind girl. So she always saw beautiful . We love each other .