小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My name is Yvonne.I am a twenty old girl.Lily is my best friend. She is nighteen old girl.Yeah. We are neigbour and classmate too.We spend all the free time with together. Just like family rather than friend. She is a lovely and kind girl. So she always saw beautiful. We love each other.