小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My name is Yvonne.I am a twenty old girl.Lily is my best friend. She is nineteen old girl.Yeah. We are neighbour and classmate too.We alwas spend time playing with together. Just like family rather than friends. She is a lovely and kind girl. She always made me happy. We love each other.