正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;文章衔接手法恰当。
My name is Yvonne.I am a twenty old girl.Lily is my best friend. She is nineteen old girl.Yeah. We are neighbour and classmate too.We always spend time playing with together. Just like family rather than friends. She is a lovely and kind girl. She always made me happy. We love each other.