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小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:32浏览次数:7162
要求:
描述我的新老师。
用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多。

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When I chose to study further, it is because I want to avoid the job pressure, now three years will pass, I come to my cross road again, at this time, I must make my choice, I can’t avoid the pressure anymore. I have already made my future plan, it has two parts. One part of my future plan is that I want to be a teacher. This is my career plan, being a teacher is always my dream, I can pass my knowledge to students, I like to talk to them, I want to lead them to the successful road. So now I must pay attention to the recruit message, I should seize every chance to be a teacher. The other part of my future plan is that I want to travel around the world. Being a teacher can make me have many vacations, so I can make used of these vacations and to carry out my travel plan. I have heard about many interesting foreign things, so I want to go out and have a look at the world.

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