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假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。
注意： 词数不少于60.
提示词： 游乐园 amusement park
垃圾箱 bin
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用偏少；文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达，但词汇拼写要更加认真。
Last week,my classmates came togather to discuss the place of our spring outing.there are many places to choose,such as the amusement park,a lake nearby,or the mountain around our school.finally,we all had the same view,which is to climb the mountain and clean the rubish along the road.we had a nice day.l lot of rubish were put into the bin.
