句式变化不明显,另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写方面也要加强;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。
As the description says that The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the important national festivals in China.It comes from an old story and memory a great man called QUYUAN. As the important national festivals in China,The Dragon Boat Festival have been celebrate for a long time.In the countryside,people always hold a big function.My home lacated near by the river.